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paperbackwriter21: Good evening everyone....

knitwitsl: Hello

tichure: let's talk about final paper

tichure: have you chosen your topics yet

knitwitsl: Yes.

mohrpwr: no not yet

tichure: which one knit

knitwitsl: "The Martian Chronicles" by Ray Bradbury

tichure: very good

tichure: critical approaches?

knitwitsl: I'm just looking into that now. I've printed off a few biographies and I have 
some specific historical items I want to look up as well. Any suggestions?

tichure: new historical would be interesting

tichure: remember that when these were written, space travel was a dream

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tichure: to actually have a vehicle on Mars changes are perception of what Martian means

tichure: psychoanalytical perspective might also be interesting, as it would reveal 
Bradbury's own dreams and desires

tichure: as well as his fears

tichure: historical context will tell us that Americans were frightened by the sputnik 
satellite which was launched by the Russians in the '50s

tichure: the idea of space being a friendly place or an unfriendly place was replicated in 
many movies and science fiction as a genre exploded, primarily creating poor ethic scenes 
but also creating scenes of gentle beings who would save us from ourselves

tichure: poor ethic equals horrific

tichure: feminist criticism would reveal the standard gender roles at the time

tichure: Marxist criticism would reveal class struggles as evidenced in the stories

knitwitsl: I like the approach of psychoanalytical perspective, especially with the section 
on book burning, but I haven't found anything yet in his biography to reveal that. But I am 
still looking.

tichure: which particular story has to do with the burning

tichure: I am familiar of course with Fahrenheit 451, but that was a separate novel

knitwitsl: The House of Usher.

tichure: i know however that he was concerned about censorship

knitwitsl: A man came to mars to build a house of Usher because all his books were burned in 
the great cleansing

tichure: interesting

tichure: you know where the term house of usher comes from

knitwitsl: Yes, but I did not read that particular story. I may do so now though.

tichure: it probably is not necessary

tichure: as long as you know the poe reference

knitwitsl: It was interesting to see the other parts of that chapter from other books I have 
read.

tichure: essentially the house of usher refers to a family lineage that is dying... the only 
two left are a brother and sister

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tichure: heynow 127

gigglez127: hello how is everyone doing?

tichure: we are discussing final paper

tichure: we are talking to knit right now

gigglez127: ok

tichure: in the meantime, mohr, go to 
http://www.englit.org/distance/engl103/paperlist.htm

tichure: see what looks interesting

mohrpwr: ok you know it is a thurs one day left

tichure: writer, the gigglez...have you chose in your final paper topic

mohrpwr: I am there looking at what I want to do

tichure: mohr, one day left to do what

paperbackwriter21: The Bean Trees, Kingsolver

tichure: knit, look around at some secondary source material

mohrpwr: if we do a poem we have to do 5-10

mohrpwr: how do we do that

tichure: ahh yes writer

paperbackwriter21: Haven't chosen critical approach yet....

mohrpwr: just have different sections

tichure: 5 to 10 poems from the same author that are thematically linked

gigglez127: for the final paper..im not sure yet?

mohrpwr: ok 

tichure: http://www.englit.org/distance/engl103/paperlist.htm hen go to 
that page

paperbackwriter21: I think that two are required for this paper?

tichure: two critical approaches that is correct

tichure: biographical and historical count as one

mohrpwr: so the beatles you find 5 lyrics

tichure: yes

mohrpwr: ok

knitwitsl: I did start on that last night and plan to spend some time in the library next 
week. I saw on our list that an outline and notecards are due some time soon. Do we have to 
give your our notecards?

tichure: although if you picked a song like yesterday, you could do three critical 
approaches and do 7 to 10 pages

tichure: note cards

tichure: I was going to get to that an explained today

tichure: as well as outline

tichure: I just covering general questions first

tichure: we will get to those details very soon

gigglez127: yeah note cards...i was reading about that today?

tichure: I will explain

tichure: about now

gigglez127: ok good

tichure: how about now

mohrpwr: note cards?

paperbackwriter21: I haven't....what's with the note cards

tichure: http://www.englit.org/eiland_shared/ppts.htm

tichure: go there

tichure: under organization and structure

tichure: choose note cards

tichure: back in a good old days, when students were gathering information for a paper, they 
would take three by 5 note cards into the library and began going through secondary sources

tichure: the idea was that as you collected information, you would write things down so that 
later you could choose which secondary sources were going to be helpful and which you would 
discard

mohrpwr: when r those due

tichure: in today's modern age, we still needed organizational tool

tichure: within the next two weeks

mohrpwr: ok

tichure: however, since you will be creating for me a Works cited page for your final draft, 
I want you to modify the project

tichure: go to the library or get online

tichure: find a series of secondary sources that you think will be hopeful

tichure: give me the information that you would have with inthe Works cited

tichure: author title of work title of anthology publisher city date

tichure: underneath that information you will explain what the secondary source offers

tichure: biography

tichure: historical context

tichure: critical analysis

tichure: within the next two weeks you are to send me at least 7 secondary sources annotated 
in this way

tichure: that is not to say that you will necessarily use them in your final draft

paperbackwriter21: send how?

tichure: attachment

paperbackwriter21: thank you

tichure: in fact, by going through these note cards while you are creating your essay, you 
will find that perhaps some information is redundant and there are other bits of information 
missing that will fulfill your paper

mohrpwr: ok

tichure: the other element that will help you in this construction is the outline

tichure: began, in the old days, when papers were typewritten, smart students created an 
outline in order to maintain organization, because if their paper was disorganized, they had 
to retire the entire project

tichure: today, because of computers and cut and paste, that is not so important

tichure: however, many students find an outline helpful in keeping information gathering 
under control

tichure: if you know from a outline that you need to cover biography, history, 
psychoanalysis, and feminist information, for example, putting your note cards side by side 
with your outline will show you where you have a over abundance of information and where you 
lack information

tichure: your outline is not due to me right away unless you want commentary on where your 
paper is going

tichure: but

tichure: you must have an outline to me either before the final draft or with the final 
draft

tichure: if I do not see an outline of this final paper you will lose 5 percent of your 
grade

tichure: if you do not do the note cards for me you will lose another 10 percent of your 
grade

tichure: more importantly, these can help you create a more cohesive and comprehensive paper

tichure: and considering you do not get to rewrite, doing these projects for your own 
benefit might be in order

tichure: note the examples on the note card page

tichure: when you give me your final Works cited with your finished draft, merely discard 
any Works you did not use and take away all of the annotation... the explanations of what 
these are for

tichure: and you have your Works cited page

tichure: in other words, as you do your note cards, you are doing your op. cit. page

tichure: any questions about these

gigglez127: none so far

mohrpwr: ok

tichure: let's talk about peer editing

tichure: http://www.englit.org/eiland_shared/peerreqs.htm

tichure: we now have turnitin.com back

tichure: you are required to submit your paper for peer editing

gigglez127: the final paper

mohrpwr: oh boy

tichure: sends you are not in a writer classroom, we have to figure out some way to get some 
kind of critical response from your fellow students about the work that you're creating

tichure: since you are not in a regular classroom

tichure: turnit in.com does that for us

tichure: the instructions for accessing this website are on the page I have just sent you

tichure: once you sign in, you will be allowed to post the text of your paper

tichure: only I will know whose paper belongs to whom

tichure: unless of course, you include your name in the text of the paper you submit

tichure: there is a space for including the text of your work

tichure: there is a space for including your Works cited

knitwitsl: Do our papers stay there indefinately, or do they get erased after the class is 
over?

tichure: when you send in your essay, it will be scanned for sources automatically

tichure: the entire class gets erased and archive so that only I can access it

paperbackwriter21: When are these peer edits do?

tichure: more importantly, knit, once they are in the archive, even as the student paper, 
anyone who would use your paper in a future class would get their paper red flag as having 
been previously submitted under your name

tichure: this is primarily for your benefit

tichure: so as soon as possible

tichure: remember, you want some positive feedback from your fellow students

tichure: before you write the final draft

tichure: two weeks is good

tichure: it gives you enough time to write a reasonable draft and gives you enough time to 
respond to what others tell you about organization, secondary source usage, and critical 
approach analysis

tichure: Any Final research

paper handed in without a peer edit (completed BEFORE the due date of the

paper) will either drop one whole grade (B+ becomes a C+), or may even be

rejected entirely.

knitwitsl: What if no one gives you feedback on your paper?

tichure: i will know you tried

knitwitsl: Okay, that sound very fair.

knitwitsl: "sounds very fair"!

gigglez127: this is the term paper right?

tichure: I would suggest, however, since this is primarily for your benefit rather than me 
just cracking the whip, that you buddy up with somebody can make sure that you both your 
papers read and you both get a chance to read someone's paper

tichure: yes 127

mohrpwr: so the ruff draft has to be in two weeks early then

tichure: correct

mohrpwr: ok 

tichure: your paper is due in four weeks

tichure: finished

tichure: completed

tichure: no rewrite

mohrpwr: ok so in two

tichure: no changes

tichure: start work on it yesterday

gigglez127: no pressure

tichure: or sooner

tichure: indeed

tichure: nothing whatsoever

mohrpwr: ha no kidding

tichure: I don't feel a thing

mohrpwr: I love english

knitwitsl: Okay. Is anyone here willing to buddy up for a peer edit?

tichure: good question

mohrpwr: 

gigglez127: hehe

paperbackwriter21: Sure

tichure: we have a match

gigglez127: im down for peer editing

mohrpwr: we got as winner

paperbackwriter21: That was easy

mohrpwr: ok you and me giggles

tichure: exchange e-mail addresses so that you can easily identify the work when it gets on 
the network

gigglez127: alright got it

tichure: remember that the papers when they are posted will not have names on them

tichure: still make sure your partner knows the title of your work

tichure: or perhaps the first line

tichure: that way you know you are helping out your partner

tichure: any questions about peer editing

tichure: we are looking for help in structure

tichure: organization

tichure: critical analysis use

tichure: correct format for secondary source use

mohrpwr: how will you know it was done

tichure: appropriate analysis of fallacy or weakness

mohrpwr: just the turnin.com

tichure: because I read every paper that is posted on it

tichure: and you will send me a response that you got if it was sent by e-mail

tichure: just make a copy and attach it to your paper

tichure: how are we doing so far

tichure: paper is to be 9-14 pages

tichure: 3-7 secondary sources

tichure: 1-10 primary sources, depending on your choice

tichure: Works cited

tichure: title page

tichure: peer edit

tichure: three or more critical approaches

tichure: one weakness or fallacy

tichure: which we will discuss now

tichure: go to literary terms

tichure: http://www.englit.org/eiland_shared/theme_terms.htm

tichure: choose argument weaknesses and fallacies

tichure: http://www.englit.org/eiland_shared/critical/fallacy.htm

tichure: most critical analyses are based on a perspective presented by an author

tichure: the idea is that the author is being reasonable and careful in his or her analyses, 
drying conclusions from the primary source as well as established secondary sources

tichure: often, however, a person's critical analysis takes liberties with "facts" of the 
work or may draw conclusions that are based on portions of the text that may be denied or 
disproven by other sections of the taxed


tichure: when this happens, the critic is creating a fallacy

tichure: to better understand this, understand that any critical analysis, or even any essay 
or story is an agreement between the reader and the writer

tichure: the agreement has to do with a shared set of assumptions and values as to good and 
bad

tichure: analysis of the poem on its services seems to reveal that the author merely describes the painting formalistically

tichure: on its surface

tichure: however, to say so would be a weaker argument because closer examination of the 
poem reveals that the author modify its her description with terminology that clearly 
reflects her own values and her own viewpoints and do not reflect the literal depiction of 
the painting

tichure: sometimes a fallacy or weakness is based on an assumption that the writer has about its reader that is not shared by the reader

tichure: some critical analysis of early works by women tend to degrade that work's 
importance merely because a woman created it

tichure: what is the assumption that this critic... usually male... thinks the audience 
shares with him about poetry by women

paperbackwriter21: Looked down upon

tichure: to because?

tichure: because

knitwitsl: No deeper meaning?

tichure: because

paperbackwriter21: Prejudice

paperbackwriter21: to prejudge

tichure: specifically

knitwitsl: because back then they didn't think women had much depth

tichure: good answer

tichure: sent back in me, say, 1850 is that the majority of writers were

tichure: ...

mohrpwr: male

knitwitsl: male

tichure: and the majority of readers were

tichure: ...

mohrpwr: male

knitwitsl: male

paperbackwriter21: also male

tichure: and a majority of critics were...

knitwitsl: male

tichure: and the majority of editors and book publishers were...

knitwitsl: male.

mohrpwr: male

tichure: would that assumption be correct?

paperbackwriter21: I am beginning to note a trend

tichure: indeed

mohrpwr: male

knitwitsl: no

mohrpwr: figured I was on a role

tichure: explained knit

tichure: gotta go with what you know mohr

mohrpwr: ha

knitwitsl: Just because women didn't write as much as men, or read as much does not mean 
they were not intelligent and capable of depth back then.

tichure: but would the majority of readers tend to think so

mohrpwr: but they were shelterd

tichure: remember

tichure: this is opinion

tichure: this is not truth

tichure: it is perspective

mohrpwr: and looked down upon if they spoke out

tichure: yes

tichure: which brings us back to the question

tichure: in the 1850s, what the majority of READERS agree with the assumption

tichure: whether it was true or not

mohrpwr: Male

knitwitsl: So if a critique was done back then and it followed the general belief then it 
was a good critique?

tichure: back then

mohrpwr: yep

tichure: writer, what is your test on

knitwitsl: But we could show the fallacy of it now, right?

tichure: exactly

paperbackwriter21: The Awakening

tichure: new historical criticism

tichure: feminist criticism

tichure: psychoanalytical criticism

tichure: marches criticism

tichure: Marxist

paperbackwriter21: Feminist

tichure: reader response

tichure: writer, have you done any research on critical analysis

tichure: How did critics respond to the awakening what was first published

tichure: when it was first published

paperbackwriter21: 1899

paperbackwriter21: It was considered "vulgar"

tichure: why

paperbackwriter21: It virtually ended Chopin's career

tichure: why 

paperbackwriter21: The story has to do with the sexual awakening of a married woman....2 
affairs...suicide

tichure: if it were about a man, would the response have been todifferent

paperbackwriter21: It was a very Victorian age...but it would have not been so devistating 
on Chopins career

tichure: a weakness in a critical analysis reveals the biases and assumptions

tichure: that are expected to be shared by the readership that may not be

tichure: they may also be blatant Misreadings of the work

tichure: critical analysis is largely based on individual perspective that is held by a 
critic

tichure: yer welcome

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tichure: just as we might reread the awakening from a different perspective today

tichure: because of the changes in society,

tichure: it is some of those changes

knitwitsl: It's hard to imagine reading that book back when it was written.

tichure: that themselves may out of weaknesses or fallacies

tichure: true

tichure: but most breakthrough work is like that

tichure: it is seen much later as quality

tichure: but at the time

tichure: is hated

tichure: and vice versa

paperbackwriter21: Literally

tichure: what is popular at the time

tichure: turns out later to be insignificant

tichure: Brittany spears

tichure: enough said

tichure: the star land vocal band

tichure: heheh

tichure: name that tune

paperbackwriter21: It was 20 years ago today....

knitwitsl: It does make one wonder what is out now that is truly worth reading. Which some 
time I would like to ask you where to find out good books that are newly written.

tichure: sometimes people who have a particular critical perspective... especially the 
critical perspectives that we now steady as part of this class... tend to view works through 
one very specific prism and often they alter the intended meaning of a work

tichure: that is hit and miss, knit

tichure: after awhile, you find an author by accident

knitwitsl: Bummer. With so little time and so many new books out there!

tichure: and then you stick with it

tichure: that's what keeps the book companies in business

knitwitsl: Once we find a fallacy in a critique, and and where do we put that in our paper?

tichure: in a paragraph where you think it fits

tichure: essentially, it will be its own paragraph

tichure: it may be in response to a critical analysis that you've chosen

tichure: it may be that critical response itself

tichure: for example

tichure: feminist criticism has broken new ground in the way that we view work both old and 
new

tichure: however

tichure: to apply the perspective that every work written by a man degrades women is 
fallacious

tichure: for example

tichure: Ernest Hemingway was usually applauded as America's greatest writer during his time

tichure: his use of dialogue and his minimalist approach created a new style of literature

tichure: however, feminists took to task his negative portrayal of women and declared that 
he hated women based on several of his characters

paperbackwriter21: I never read him....Is this true?

tichure: while their assessment of his female characters on the surface was correct... they 
were often a week, petty, angry and belittling of men...these feminist critics fail to point 
out that the men in his stories are equally damaged... alcoholic, petty, belittling of their 
women

paperbackwriter21: bias based on preconceived opinions

tichure: what was their mistake

knitwitsl: So, according to their critique then, Hemingway didn't like people? Their mistake 
being that they only took one section of his writing and did not consider the whole

tichure: actually, writer, that is true

tichure: knit, their critique was that Hemingway didn't like women only

tichure: the truth is that Hemingway did not like people

tichure: he said so himself

tichure: in fact, he said the best person he ever knew

tichure: was his first wife

tichure: he had four

tichure: and committed suicide

tichure: as did his father

tichure: his grandfather

tichure: his son

tichure: and one of his granddaughters

tichure: attempted it

paperbackwriter21: sad

knitwitsl: Then the critique was partially right?

tichure: MargotHemingway

tichure: from the movie Superman

tichure: his other granddaughter is Muriel Hemingway

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tichure: actually, based on their own criteria, their analysis is incorrect

tichure: remember the feminist perspective

tichure: the feminist perspective says that the integration of women is often intentional in 
order to keep them in a particular place

tichure: denigration, not integration

tichure: and when it is accidental, it is a result of an ingrained bias

tichure: since Hemingway clearly created unlikable and damaged characters both male and 
female, they are drawing a conclusion that actually flies in the face of his intent

tichure: in many cases, his strongest characters are women

tichure: they may not be likable, but if they were man, they would certainly be the primary 
characters

tichure: strong

tichure: independent

tichure: forceful

tichure: given that he wrote during the early 1900s, these women would stand out

tichure: and people in general would find them unlikable

tichure: but feminist criticism was occurring during the 1960s

tichure: when women were supposed to be viewed equally

tichure: according to feminist theory

tichure: which means

tichure: if she is strong, she should be viewed as a strong person

tichure: rather than viewed from the perspective of traditional culture that says a strong 
woman is...

tichure: you fill in the blank

knitwitsl: not very feminine

tichure: that is a very diplomatic answer

knitwitsl: politically correct



tichure: whether or not Hemingway is for war against women is hard to say because he was 
writing in an era that declared that strong women were often undesirable, to say the least



tichure: remember that these arguments are based on a particular perspective and very often 
it is the perspective that sets the guidelines for the discussion

knitwitsl: Since I haven't read one of his books, are the strong women written as not nice 
characters?

tichure: very often be weakness will merely be an omission by the author of a particular 
portion of a story that disproves a point

tichure: it is relative, wit

tichure: 1910

tichure: think about a woman's expected role

tichure: now place her out in Africa hunting big game with a husband she does not respect

knitwitsl: Back in 1910 I understand. But the feminist critique was done in the 1960's, 
right?

tichure: exactly my point

tichure: perhaps when Hemingway was writing this, he did intend to create this nasty 
character

tichure: because he knew that his audience would see her as such

knitwitsl: Oh. I think I understand what you are saying now.

tichure: but a feminist critique should praise his portrayal as being strong and 
individualistic, 

tichure: more to the point, is his male characters were well rounded, articulate giving and 
kind and his females were the opposite

tichure: the argument would have merit

tichure: instead, he created realistic arguments between people falling in and out of love

tichure: he looks like a jerk

tichure: she sounds like a bitch

tichure: you are feminist writer

tichure: you clue in on the bitch

tichure: especially if you already believe

tichure: most men are jerks anyway

knitwitsl: So, to show that the critique is a fallacy, one would point out that he doesn't 
just give an unfair treatment to his women characters, but to all characters?

tichure: the main idea here is that often critical perspectives chosen by critics so narrow 
the scope of the conversation as to ignore important points

tichure: exactly

tichure: or shown examples of fair treatment to women characters

tichure: and there are some

tichure: Hemingway was a troubled person

tichure: who wrote about troubled people

tichure: likewise many of the authors that we consider geniuses today led troubled lives

tichure: Edgar Allan Poe

tichure: Walt Whitman

tichure: Sylvia Plath

knitwitsl: kind of sad

tichure: their unique perspectives on life allowed them to show some of the less desirable 
aspects of human nature

tichure: the same goes for musical artists

tichure: painters

tichure: poets

tichure: sculptors

paperbackwriter21: Van Goth

tichure: anyone who expresses themselves through art

tichure: exactly

tichure: van gogh was a troubled man yet his art shows both confusion and beauty

knitwitsl: It is still very sad - to be able to get so much enjoyment out of one persons 
misery.

tichure: be aware that it is difficult to find weaknesses in primary sources especially in 
fiction because offers create characters in order to examine them. A well drawn out 
character that has flaws is not the result of flawed thinking by the author but rather 
excellent insight into the various sickness is of the human mind
on story that we are all familiar with

tichure: pick one

knitwitsl: A short story?

tichure: yes

tichure: even a fable

tichure: or fairytale 

paperbackwriter21: Cinderella

tichure: ok

tichure: characters?

knitwitsl: Evil step mom, prince, Cinderella

tichure: ok

paperbackwriter21: Cinderella, Prince Charming

knitwitsl: Wicked step sisters

tichure: what is the purpose of the story

paperbackwriter21: good conquers evil

tichure: btw, have we covered mythological or archetypal criticism

tichure: okay writer

tichure: based on that assumption alone

knitwitsl: This may sound odd, but I always thought it was to tell women that if they marry 
well they will be taken care of. Needless to say, I didn't care for the story!

tichure: knit, you are so modern

tichure: let's take this a step at a time

tichure: let's take for granted that writer is correct

tichure: look at the characters

tichure: are the stereotypical or are they rounded and complex

knitwitsl: stereotypical

tichure: can we blame the author for his stereotypical characters considering his audience 
and the point he's trying to make

tichure: who is the audience

knitwitsl: young kids.

tichure: yes

tichure: given that information

paperbackwriter21: no...it;s a children story

tichure: are his characterizations appropriate

knitwitsl: No. I guess things need to be rather simplistic.

tichure: explain writer

tichure: yes wit

tichure: what happens if he points out that the stepmother is not so much what did, as 
merely insecure about her husbands feelings for her own daughters

tichure: is not so much wicked

tichure: what happens to our perception of good vs. evil

paperbackwriter21: story is deminished

tichure: what happens to the children's understanding of story

tichure: exactly

tichure: would be fair event to criticize this author for creating stereotypical negative female characters given our understanding of context

paperbackwriter21: no

knitwitsl: I guess not.

tichure: let's take wits perspective

tichure: according to wit, what is the purpose of the story

tichure: much different from writer

knitwitsl: to tell women that if they marry well they will be taken care of. 

tichure: how do they get a good man

tichure: what is Cinderella rewarded for

tichure: what are attributes

knitwitsl: Cinderella is rewarded for sneaking out and lying to her stepmom

tichure: contrast her to to step sisters

tichure: before that

tichure: actually,wit, she did not lie

tichure: according to the original French story by Perrault

knitwitsl: Oh. She is rewarded for being pretty and nice and not complaining.

tichure: exactly

tichure: the stepmother threw beans into the ashes and told her to pick them up and put them 
back

tichure: her bird friends came in and sorted the beans from the ashes

tichure: she was also told that she had to finish all her work

tichure: which he did

tichure: which she did

tichure: and she was told she would have to have a dress

tichure: which she got from

tichure: fairy godmother

tichure: it is important actually that she did NOT lie

tichure: why

knitwitsl: Oh yeah! It's been a while since I've seen the cartoon! Sorry.

tichure: what he/she being rewarded for

tichure: the cartoon is Disney

tichure: and Disney changes things

tichure: takes the edge off

tichure: simplifies

tichure: in the original

tichure: there was more than one ball

paperbackwriter21: I didn't know that

knitwitsl: That is interesting. I would like to read the original one then. 

knitwitsl: It would be important that she did not lie because the writer wants to show that 
she is good, pretty and doesn't complain.

knitwitsl: She is rewarded for being that way.

tichure: well, this is important because the Prince two days to fall in love rather than a 
few hours

tichure: very good

tichure: in that case, what is the purpose of the work for its audience

tichure: what is the responds it is trying to evopke

tichure: response is trying to evoke

knitwitsl: That good people win?

tichure: who was the specific audience

knitwitsl: Young girls in particular.

paperbackwriter21: was it originally a childs story?

tichure: what do they want in life

tichure: it was instructive, writer

knitwitsl: Back then, to be married to a good and wealthy man.

tichure: remember that most people did not read back then, so it would have been told as a 
folktale until he was written down

paperbackwriter21: feels of security

tichure: what symbolizes good wealthy security

knitwitsl: a castle?

paperbackwriter21: A rich prince

paperbackwriter21: definitely a castle

tichure: very good

tichure: who is unworthy in that society according to the story

paperbackwriter21: evil doers

knitwitsl: the ugly step-sisters

tichure: is the word ugly necessary

tichure: according to this paradigm

tichure: you may refer to Disney on this one

knitwitsl: That is how I've always heard them referred to. I would think it's necessary to 
point out the contrast of the pretty, nice Cinderella. 

tichure: what would happen to our perspective on the story if the step sisters were 
attractive

tichure: of course

paperbackwriter21: loss of contrast

tichure: according to this story, what is your value as a female based on

paperbackwriter21: black hats white hats

knitwitsl: Being pretty and being nice

tichure: and for men

paperbackwriter21: looks

paperbackwriter21: money

tichure: yes

tichure: how about personality

tichure: to whom is more important... man or women

knitwitsl: Personality doesn't seem to count if the man is rich.

knitwitsl: Okay, I take part of that back.

knitwitsl: The woman wants a nice, rich man. The prince wants a pretty, docile woman.

tichure: good

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tichure: mythological or archetypal criticism says that literature has portrayed societies 
expectations of various characters and situations

tichure: every journey is symbolic of the trek for holy grail

tichure: every young attractive woman is a victim or prize

tichure: every older woman is either...

tichure: fill in the blanks

knitwitsl: wise

knitwitsl: evil

tichure: give me the stereotype

tichure: which one is wise

tichure: which one is evil

tichure: two different distinct characters

knitwitsl: wise old lady (I can

knitwitsl: I hit my return too soon, sorry!

tichure: heheh

knitwitsl: evil step mom. 

tichure: very good

tichure: why STEP mom

paperbackwriter21: could be either, age bestoys wisdom on some, and bitterness on others

paperbackwriter21: subtle hint of loss of parent

knitwitsl: Because the real mother is portrayed as loving

knitwitsl: and the step mom is protrayed as evil trying to replace the mother

tichure: excellent

tichure: what character is good and wise and old and female

knitwitsl: The Fairygod mother

paperbackwriter21: perfect

tichure: stereotypical hero is

knitwitsl: a prince

tichure: mail or female

knitwitsl: male

paperbackwriter21: male

tichure: rich or poor

knitwitsl: rich

tichure: landowner or not

knitwitsl: landowner. And strong

tichure: nice

tichure: mythological criticism can often be used to point out weaknesses in presentation if 
the intent is to instruct

tichure: however

tichure: be aware that sometimes stories are written to entertain and therefore stereotypes 
are important and useful

tichure: next week I hope to hear more about your chosen final papers

tichure: in the meantime, get your secondary sources together

tichure: send me your note cards

tichure: take the test this week if you like

knitwitsl: Okay. Have a good weekend!

paperbackwriter21: Good night all

tichure: take care

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