12:07:03	 From tichure : hi Bailey, how can I help you

12:07:32	 From Bailey : Hi Professor, 

12:08:15	 From tichure : how is your paper coming along

12:16:42	 From tichure : what two critical perspectives are you using for your first paper

12:17:41	 From Bailey : that's a great question, I have not decided yet. 

12:20:13	 From Bailey :, do you think it would be correct to say that Poe can be analyzed with a Marxist criticism because his character deeply expresses his hatred for Fortunato as his describes how hes going to kill him?

12:20:58	 From tichure : tell me what Marxist criticism is

12:21:52	 From Bailey : well for one of the definitions it is when the author is using their work to perhaps persuade the reader to think/believe something that they think/believe 

12:22:19	 From tichure : okay and what is the message the reader from the story

12:22:33	 From tichure : what is the author telling us about life or a particular type of relationship in life

12:23:04	 From Bailey : he's telling us that he feels wronged by this person and 
therefore feels that the only answer is to end his life

12:25:08	 From tichure : I need you to separate the story and the character from the author

12:25:13	 From tichure : is this autobiographical

12:25:29	 From tichure : did this happen to Edgar Allan Poe

12:25:51	 From Bailey : not that he's ever admitted to

12:25:55	 From Bailey : from what i gather

12:26:10	 From tichure : and that is correct

12:26:27	 From tichure : do you know where he got the story from

12:27:16	 From Bailey : though there is some speculation that i found from one secondary source that his work can be looked at possibly as historical fiction? i think that's the term they used. and that he possibly wrote some of his tales based on actual events in his life

12:27:35	 From Bailey : based on real people and occurrences 

12:27:54	 From tichure : when author creates a fiction, whether it is a poem or story or play or movie, the author is trying to do at least two things. The first and most obvious is that they are selling a product for entertainment. The second and sometimes less obvious is that there also “selling” an argument that they want you to “buy”   (meaning that they are trying to get you to understand or agree with an idea)

12:28:00	 From tichure : not based on his life

12:28:15	 From tichure : we are talking about a guy who kills another guy by burying 
him in a way that no one will ever find this person

12:28:26	 From tichure : and the reason that Montresor is killing Fortunato is 
revenge for insult

12:28:30	 From Bailey : right

12:28:49	 From tichure : the author is telling the story in a particular way with particular types of characters behaving in specific ways because he is telling us something other than simply a story

12:28:59	 From tichure : he is editorializing on people in society that lived in his time

12:29:05	 From tichure : as well as explaining some aspect of human nature

12:29:10	 From tichure : for example

12:29:19	 From tichure : does Montresor get away with killing Fortunato

12:29:31	 From Bailey :  as far as we know, yes

12:29:37	 From tichure : does he feel good about it

12:29:41	 From Bailey : yes

12:29:45	 From tichure : really

12:30:06	 From Bailey : that's what i gathered from multiple lines, he stops at one point to relish in the jingling of the bells

12:30:07	 From tichure : how long had it been since he committed this act

12:30:11	 From Bailey : as if hes taking that moment in

12:30:25	 From tichure : are you sure about that

12:31:25	 From Bailey : yes and no...I play devils advocate with myself and often question whether it could be a whole different perspective. like is he just mad and has materialized the whole thing

12:31:35	 From tichure : one of the things about MLA style analysis is that when you make a claim about something happening in the story, you have to show me quotation


12:31:44	 From tichure : and by mad you mean crazy

12:31:46	 From Bailey : yes

12:32:12	 From tichure : how long has it been since he killed the guy

12:32:34	 From Bailey : that i do not know

12:32:45	 From tichure : is in the last two paragraphs of the story

12:32:57	 From tichure : that tells us the time that has passed since the murder of Fortunato

12:33:29	 From Bailey : let me see

12:34:11	 From Bailey : 50 years?

12:34:14	 From tichure : yes

12:34:32	 From tichure : who is Montresor talking to? Telling the story to

12:34:42	 From Bailey : so he's revisiting the tomb then after 50 years?

12:34:52	 From Bailey : it sounds like he's talking to himself

12:35:31	 From tichure : is within the first two paragraphs of the story that he addresses the listener directly

12:36:03	 From Bailey : okay so it sounds like he's addressing someone he knows

12:36:06	 From Bailey : that may know him well

12:36:07	 From tichure : yes

12:36:09	 From tichure : but more importantly

12:36:22	 From tichure : actually knows what aspect of him

12:36:46	 From Bailey : the nature of his soul

12:36:49	 From tichure : yes

12:36:53	 From tichure : and who would that be

12:37:01	 From Bailey : his wife

12:37:04	 From tichure : where is Montresor from

12:37:11	 From Bailey : France

12:37:14	 From tichure : he has no wife in the story

12:37:17	 From tichure : that is correct

12:37:23	 From Bailey : oh that's right sorry, getting him confused with poe

12:37:37	 From tichure : and of course he lives where. Where does the story take place?

12:38:11	 From Bailey : in italy

12:39:49	 From tichure : And what cultural influence, one major aspect of a culture, do France and Italy share

12:40:48	 From tichure : is a worldwide cultural influence, but its headquarters is in Italy

12:40:50	 From Bailey : umm

12:40:56	 From Bailey : the freemasons

12:41:02	 From Bailey : or wine?

12:41:03	 From tichure : you’re on the right track because it’s a belief system

12:41:26	 From tichure : the Freemasons actually started out working for this particular  group all through Europe

12:41:41	 From tichure : because the Freemasons were able to build something that was very important to this group

12:41:51	 From Bailey : hmm

12:41:59	 From Bailey : i'm not sure then

12:42:01	 From tichure : there are famous examples of what they built in Italy in multiple cities, in France, England, Spain, Germany etc.

12:42:19	 From tichure : the center of this culture is in Rome

12:42:22	 From tichure : famously

12:42:29	 From tichure : the leader of this culture is in Rome

12:42:32	 From Bailey : roman Catholics?

12:42:37	 From tichure : in fact, it is in a little principality with in Rome

12:42:39	 From tichure : yes

12:42:46	 From tichure : and who would somebody be talking to

12:42:49	 From tichure : him that culture

12:42:53	 From tichure : that knows the nature of his soul

12:42:56	 From tichure : so well

12:43:04	 From Bailey : perhaps a priest?

12:43:05	 From tichure : someone he might be speaking to in his old age

12:43:07	 From Bailey : like hes doing a confession

12:43:08	 From tichure : perhaps even near death

12:43:15	 From tichure : yes

12:43:16	 From tichure : yes

12:43:18	 From tichure : so

12:43:22	 From tichure : I asked the question again

12:43:27	 From tichure : how long has it been since he did this deed

12:43:34	 From Bailey : 50 years

12:43:36	 From tichure : and is he comfortable with it

12:44:06	 From tichure : how many times did Montresor ask Fortunato to turn back

12:44:46	 From Bailey : um

12:45:11	 From Bailey : i see one time

12:45:38	 From Bailey : two times


12:46:03	 From tichure : one of the times he asks is sarcastic because by then, it is too late

12:46:36	 From tichure : what is the term that Montresor uses to refer to Fortunato other than Fortunato’s name

12:47:54	 From Bailey : my friend?

12:47:57	 From tichure : yes

12:48:55	 From tichure : and what are the requirements for a successful revenge\ according to the narrator himself?

12:49:04	 From tichure : this would be in the first couple paragraphs

12:49:14	 From tichure : in a language that is not from today, but is nonetheless understandable

12:49:55	 From Bailey : um

12:50:41	 From Bailey : to punish without impunity

12:50:51	 From tichure : actually

12:50:56	 From tichure : it is to punish WITH impunity

12:50:59	 From tichure : what is impunity

12:51:11	 From Bailey : oh right, read it incorrectly

12:51:19	 From Bailey : punishment

12:51:29	 From Bailey : so he wants to make sure he gets away with it

12:51:33	 From tichure : yes

12:51:42	 From tichure : and actually to be technical, impunity means to not be punished

12:51:58	 From tichure : what else is required

12:52:16	 From Bailey : oh okay. based off that statement then we could assume 
that he had this planned and was methodical about it right?


12:52:32	 From tichure : yes, but we also want the details as to how it went

12:52:51	 From tichure : what are the other two parameters for successful revenge

12:53:38	 From tichure : but you are correct in the sense that by the time he gets Fortunato down there, he has prepared the burial because he has already affixed chains to the wall, creating a niche and made sure there was brick-and-mortar down there hidden from sight

12:54:43	 From tichure : besides punishing with impunity, what else does he say 
has to happen

12:54:59	 From tichure : he uses the term redress

12:55:06	 From Bailey : okay so would the other means for a perfect revenge be that the wrong-doer never attempted to make amends

12:55:19	 From tichure : where did you get that idea

12:55:28	 From tichure : this is why you have to use quotation rather than just paraphrase.

12:55:31	 From Bailey : the last line in the first paragraph

12:55:36	 From tichure : Because you have to be translating the words accurately

12:55:39	 From tichure : give me that actually live

12:55:41	 From tichure : line

12:55:52	 From Bailey : It is equally unredressed when the avenger fails to make

himself felt as such to him who has done the wrong.

12:56:11	 From tichure : who is the avenger

12:57:04	 From Bailey : okay wait yeah i misinterpreted that then...so Montressor is the avenger and he's saying it is "unredressed" when he doesn’t  make his dubious intentions unknown to the wrong-doer

12:58:02	 From Bailey : he is able to have a solid façade 

12:58:27	 From tichure : what he’s saying is is that at some point he has let the guy know why he’s doing it

12:58:32	 From Bailey : which isn't the case because he doesn't seem to even be breaking a sweat when it comes to the crime

12:58:33	 From tichure : because he wants the guy to know the  end was foreshadowed but does he ever tell Fortunato why he’s doing this...what does he want from F?

12:58:49	 From Bailey : remorse?

12:59:03	 From tichure : yes you’re correct

12:59:17	 From tichure : does he tell Fortunato with Fortunato did wrong

12:59:26	 From Bailey : but he doesn't tell him why right

12:59:31	 From tichure : that is correct

12:59:38	 From tichure : and finally what is the third thing

12:59:43	 From tichure : he supposed to tell the guy what he is doing

12:59:46	 From tichure : and he is supposed to get away with it

12:59:49	 From tichure : what is the third thing

13:00:45	 From tichure : all there in that same set of sentences with the other two aspects of revenge

13:00:54	 From Bailey : umm 

13:01:40	 From Bailey : does it have something to do with the line

13:01:48	 From Bailey : precluded the idea of risk

13:02:11	 From tichure : give me the line they are talking about

13:02:17	 From tichure : that you are talking about

13:02:24	 From Bailey : _At length_ I would be avenged; this was a point definitely settled--but the very definitiveness with which it was resolved,
precluded the idea of risk.

13:02:36	 From tichure : the sentence I’m talking about use the word redress

13:02:47	 From Bailey : ah okay

13:03:11	 From tichure : well what he’s saying here is again the notion that 1) he 
was going to get his revenge and 2) the definition of that revenge included avoiding risk 
for himself

13:03:15	 From Bailey : when retribution overtakes its redresser

13:03:24	 From tichure : very good.

13:03:27	 From tichure : What does that mean

13:03:31	 From tichure : in English

13:04:25	 From Bailey : so he's saying that when the idea of making the wrong he feels has been done to him right takes over

13:04:34	 From Bailey : then it is ideal for him

13:05:59	 From tichure : what is retribution

13:06:51	 From Bailey : punishment on someone for a wrong act

13:06:59	 From tichure : which one of them is the redressor

13:07:16	 From Bailey : montresor

13:07:24	 From tichure : and what is “overtakes”

13:07:38	 From Bailey : consuming?

13:07:47	 From tichure : and is this positive or negative

13:08:30	 From Bailey : well it's generally negative but to the narrator it is probably seen as positive because he feels as though he can justify wanting to murder fortunato

13:08:51	 From tichure : you have to give me the sentence again

13:09:01	 From tichure : what happens when retribution overtakes its redress or

13:09:04	 From tichure : give me the entire sentence

13:09:09	 From Bailey : A wrong is unredressed when retribution overtakes its redresser.

13:09:10	 From tichure : because we need to know whether this is good or bad


13:09:21	 From tichure : the wrong is UNREDRESSED

13:09:25	 From tichure : which means what

13:09:44	 From Bailey : oh that it's bad because it is unfinished business in his eyes?

13:10:04	 From tichure : its unfinished business, the revenge is not completed, if what

13:11:13	 From Bailey : if the redresser is overtaken by retribution?

13:11:37	 From tichure : YES

13:11:55	 From tichure : can you use your own words to explain what that means

13:12:22	 From Bailey : yeah im trying to rewrite the sentence on my notebook

13:12:32	 From tichure : : you would rephrase this as “Montresor must not” or “Montresor must”

13:12:50	 From tichure : do what

13:13:52	 From tichure : because of course we want to know whether or not  he follows through on either what he is supposed to do or what he is supposed to avoid

13:14:56	 From tichure : by the way, I have this conversation every semester

13:15:04	 From Bailey : okay so he's saying that A wrong is not set right when the punishment inflicted on someone for revenge overtakes the satisfaction for reparation

13:15:12	 From tichure : yes

13:15:34	 From tichure : let’s revisit your jingling bells

13:15:36	 From Bailey : so i still have to say i don't fully understand what he's saying with that

13:16:01	 From tichure : all he saying is that when you’re getting revenge on somebody, you cannot lose control and you cannot let the revenge get to you

13:16:05	 From tichure : the act cannot get to you

13:16:08	 From tichure : can’t freak you out

13:16:09	 From Bailey : ah okay

13:16:15	 From tichure : let’s go back to your jingling bells

13:16:18	 From tichure : which is the first thing that we talked about

13:16:24	 From tichure : and you said he was enjoying the sound of the jingling 
bells

13:16:30	 From tichure : I want you to find a quotation that supports that claim

13:16:45	 From tichure : and I want to look at what he’s doing or what he wants to happen and all he gets as response is jingling bells

13:16:58	 From tichure : and whether that makes him happy or unhappy at the time

13:20:31	 From Bailey : ugh i could of sworn I read a line where he stopped to pause and listen to the bells

13:21:12	 From Bailey : not the instance that is towards the end though

13:21:47	 From tichure : he did

13:21:57	 From tichure : it  it is toward the end

13:24:46	 From Bailey : okay i found the moment of satisfaction that he describes

13:25:23	 From Bailey : I laid the second tier, and the third, and
the fourth; and then I heard the furious vibrations of the chain.  The
noise lasted for several minutes, during which, that I might hearken to
it with the more satisfaction, I ceased my labours and sat down upon
the bones.

13:25:32	 From tichure  : and then what happened

13:26:00	 From Bailey: he resumed walling up fortunato

13:26:17	 From tichure : you’re missing something

13:26:23	 From tichure : is there any conversation?

13:27:06	 From Bailey : after he has the wall at a height of his chest, he then hears fortunato scream

13:27:30	 From tichure : and

13:27:34	 From tichure : Montresor does what

13:27:34	 From Bailey: that's the first time you see him possibly regret his actions but he presumes

13:27:47	 From tichure : keep going

13:27:51	 From Bailey: A succession of loud and shrill screams, bursting suddenly from the throat of the chained form, seemed to thrust me violently back.  For a
brief moment I hesitated--I trembled.

13:28:04	 From tichure : keep going

13:28:17	 From tichure : Fortunato is screaming

13:28:21	 From tichure : what does Montresor do

13:28:29	 From Bailey:  I reapproached the wall; I replied to the yells of

him who clamoured.  I re-echoed--I aided--I surpassed them in volumeand in strength.  I 
did this, and the clamourer grew still.

13:28:39	 From Bailey: is he mocking him by yelling back the same cries?

13:28:45	 From tichure : yes

13:28:52	 From tichure : Fortunato stops

13:28:56	 From Bailey: oh wow okay, yes

13:28:57	 From tichure : and then it’s just Montresor screaming

13:29:11	 From tichure : find where he puts in the last brick

13:29:20	 From tichure : what does he want Fortunato to do?

13:29:26	 From tichure : And how easy is it to put in that last brick

13:30:24	 From Bailey : he definitely indicates that it was difficult for him

13:30:33	 From tichure : in fact he mentions

13:30:35	 From tichure : his heart


13:30:37	 From Bailey: based on him saying the weight of it could be felt in his hand


13:30:43	 From tichure: yes

13:31:24	 From tichure : what about his heart

13:31:29	 From Bailey: yeah at the very end, his heart grew sick but he says its because of the dampness of the catacombs

13:34:43	 From tichure : There is punctuation missing… unfortunately, the one mistake that the transcribers did

13:34:48	 From tichure : Should be

13:35:00	 From tichure : my heart grew sick – – on account of the  dampness of the catacombs

13:35:26	 From tichure : and just before this he is calling to Fortunato


13:35:30	 From tichure : and Fortunato is not answering

13:35:59	 From Bailey : right and he expresses feeling impatient right before that

13:36:08	 From tichure : so fortunato starts screaming and then he starts screaming

13:36:15	 From tichure : and then Fortunato stops talking altogether

13:36:25	 From tichure : and Montresor is calling to Fortunato

13:36:31	 From tichure : but Fortunato is no longer responding

13:36:35	 From Bailey : right

13:36:38	 From tichure : but is clearly still in there alive because the bells are still jingling

13:36:47	 From tichure : what does he want  Fortunato to do

13:36:51	 From Bailey : and then he just throws the torch in and that's when he hears the bells the last time

13:37:00	 From tichure : yes

13:37:02	 From Bailey : to respond to him

13:37:04	 From tichure : what does he want Fortunato to do

13:37:06	 From tichure : specifically

13:37:23	 From tichure : is what anybody who has been wronged wants

13:37:30	 From tichure : from the person who wronged them

13:37:38	 From Bailey : to apologize/admit

13:37:47	 From tichure : but he never told Fortunato why he’s doing this

13:37:53	 From Bailey : right

13:38:01	 From tichure : so Fortunato has no idea why this is happening

13:38:02	 From Bailey : so i didn't infer that he wants a confession

13:38:05	 From tichure : or what it would require

13:38:19	 From tichure : even though fortunato does offer a concession

13:38:23	 From tichure : he makes a suggestion

13:38:32	 From tichure : Two of them actually

13:38:36	 From Bailey : right, to leave and go back to the party

13:38:42	 From tichure : one of them is that they treat this particular situation as…

13:38:43	 From tichure : As what

13:38:50	 From Bailey : to which Montresor agrees even though he knows its too late

13:38:56	 From Bailey : a joke

13:38:59	 From tichure : is not just a party

13:39:03	 From tichure : where would they go

13:39:06	 From tichure : and who would be there

13:39:10	 From tichure : you got that right

13:39:14	 From tichure : he does say let’s pretend this is a joke


13:39:16	 From Bailey : luchessi

13:39:26	 From tichure : or where is he inviting Montresor

13:39:38	 From Bailey : the palazzo

13:39:45	 From Bailey : with his wife

13:39:46	 From tichure : whose palazzo?  Something much more revealing, 
something much more important to somebody like Montresor

13:39:48	 From tichure : Yes

13:39:52	 From tichure : he’s inviting into his house

13:39:55	 From tichure : to meet his wife

13:40:05	 From tichure : to basically be

13:40:07	 From tichure : included

13:40:12	 From tichure : accepted

13:40:18	 From tichure : part of the inner circle

13:40:30	 From Bailey : ah, so with him saying that it is almost a bargaining chip

13:40:33	 From tichure : yes

13:40:38	 From Bailey : like he knows he hasn't included Montresor up to this point

13:40:42	 From tichure : in the back of Fortunato’s mind, he knows that this is a class issue

13:40:44	 From tichure : that is correct

13:40:52	 From tichure : remember, why is Montresor going to kill this guy

13:40:54	 From Bailey : and wants to rectify it by inviting him

13:40:58	 From tichure : what is his motive, which is the first sentence of the story

13:40:59	 From tichure : yes

13:41:01	 From Bailey : because he has insulted him too many times


13:41:11	 From tichure : what kind of insult

13:41:15	 From tichure : and why is that important to this culture

13:41:17	 From tichure : to this guy

13:41:46	 From Bailey : The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could, but when he ventured upon insult, I vowed revenge.

13:41:56	 From tichure : are you aware of cultures in which insult would result in 
death, in which somebody’s reputation as the most important thing, even more important than “injuries” which would be translated in the upper class as financial setbacks

13:42:13	 From Bailey : ah okay

13:42:22	 From Bailey : so he has perhaps swindled him in deals

13:42:25	 From tichure : what has Fortunato been doing to Montresor

13:42:28	 From tichure : that's for sure

13:42:30	 From tichure : that’s injury

13:42:36	 From tichure : but more importantly

13:42:48	 From Bailey : and he took all of that but once he crossed a line of insult to his character/reputation is when he could not look back

13:43:08	 From tichure : Yes

13:43:11	 From tichure : why is that important

13:43:14	 From tichure : to this guy

13:43:16	 From tichure : do these people

13:43:19	 From tichure : at this time

13:43:22	 From tichure : and in this place

13:43:24	 From Bailey : because status was everything back then

13:43:31	 From Bailey : especially if they are a part of a brotherhood

13:43:31	 From tichure : YES

13:43:36	 From tichure : well is Montresor part of the same brotherhood is Fortunato

13:43:46	 From Bailey : no

13:43:52	 From tichure : that is correct

13:43:54	 From Bailey : he did not believe he was a mason 

13:44:05	 From tichure : are Freemasons higher or lower in social status at the time

13:44:16	 From Bailey : so i guess that's where some of his superiority came from, 
he felt that he was better than montresor

13:44:22	 From Bailey : higher

13:44:24	 From tichure : That is correct

13:44:41	 From Bailey : but how did he get the trowel if he was not a mason himself

13:44:48	 From Bailey : as that was something normally held by them

13:44:53	 From tichure : this is where your historical information is important

13:45:02	 From tichure : a Freemason is not a guy who builds literally

13:45:24	 From Bailey : no i know

13:45:25	 From tichure : by this time, the Freemasons are an elite group of very wealthy people and very powerful people who know secrets

13:45:27	 From Bailey : it was just a symbol

13:45:42	 From tichure : the trowel was a sarcastic gesture

13:45:46	 From Bailey : ah okay

13:45:57	 From tichure : he is basically making a joke about being a “Mason”

13:46:04	 From tichure : which  he is not

13:46:06	 From Bailey : like as in the very thing he consigns himself to will also be sealing up his fate


13:46:16	 From tichure : but he is actually going to be a mason, someone who works with bricks

13:46:27	 From Bailey : right

13:46:28	 From tichure : the Freemasons gained their power by being able to build complex structures that the church wanted for their cathedrals

13:46:32	 From Bailey : so there is a lot of irony

13:47:07	 From tichure : they got together as a group and made each of the promise that they would not share these architectural skills with just anybody

13:47:10	 From tichure : so that they would maintain their power

13:47:15	 From tichure : and that indeed is what happened.

13:47:23	 From Bailey : oh wow okay, i never knew that about them

13:47:24	 From tichure : That is why is a secret society.

13:47:30	 From tichure : Have you seen dollar bill lately

13:47:36	 From Bailey : i didn't think they were actual architects

13:47:40	 From Bailey : yes

13:47:51	 From Bailey : the eye on the pyramid

13:48:09	 From tichure : that is a Masonic symbol

13:48:16	 From tichure : the people built this country were all upper-class

13:48:23	 From tichure : George Washington etc.

13:48:29	 From tichure : they were businessmen

13:48:31	 From tichure : powerful Masons

13:48:32	 From Bailey : right

13:48:33	 From tichure : rich

13:49:02	 From tichure : and Montresor not being one means that while he is upper-class (he has an estate and servants to work on it)

13:49:08	 From tichure : he is not part of the elite upper-class.

13:49:40	 From tichure : What is the likelihood that someone who is the butt of jokes by members of this group

13:49:44	 From tichure : will be accepted to this group

13:49:57	 From Bailey : not very likely

13:49:59	 From tichure : exactly

13:50:03	 From tichure : that’s how insult leads to injury

13:50:12	 From tichure : has Montresor’s fortunes been going well or poorly?

13:50:29	 From tichure : Does he have the respect that Fortunato has?

13:50:38	 From tichure : Does he have the admiration that Fortunato has

13:50:48	 From tichure : does he have a love that Fortunato has

13:51:03	 From Bailey : well it seems he has enough fortune to partake in carnival/wine purchases and the like 

13:51:09	 From Bailey : but the rest of those things, no

13:51:13	 From tichure : again, this is a battle between two upper-class men

13:51:17	 From tichure : but

13:51:31	 From tichure : in a world where your reputation is everything for your survival

13:51:38	 From tichure : for your prosperity

13:51:47	 From tichure : somebody damaging the reputation

13:51:53	 From tichure : is your mortal enemy

13:52:03	 From Bailey : right 

13:52:14	 From tichure : does he ever tell Fortunato why he’s doing what he’s doing

13:52:19	 From Bailey : no


13:52:25	 From tichure : does he maintain emotional control throughout the entire process?

13:52:33	 From Bailey : almost but not quite

13:52:35	 From tichure : Does he get what he wanted from Fortunato?

13:53:27	 From Bailey : hm..i would say yes and no. he never gets him to actually admit to his wrong-doing but he does do away with him which in turn should account for a successful retribution

13:53:38	 From tichure : Does this Event still bother him after 50 years?

13:54:40	 From Bailey : i would say yes because if he is telling the story 50 years later and can still mention the anxiety he felt at times, then most likely yes

13:55:00	 From tichure : what kinds of things do you talk about to a priest in your 
late years. By the way, if Montresor was 20 when this event happened, he would be 70 which back then was quite old considering the average lifespan for man back then was about 45

13:55:14	 From tichure : if he was older, which is more likely, he would be even older than 70

13:55:24	 From Bailey : yeah i find that odd 

13:55:48	 From tichure : what kinds of things do you talk about toward end of your life with a priest?

13:55:53	 From Bailey : but you would be most likely to confess things you've done 

13:55:58	 From tichure : that’s correct

13:56:03	 From Bailey : that could be considered wrong

13:56:12	 From tichure : does he “get away with it” in the Catholic sense

13:56:13	 From Bailey : so he is aware of his crime

13:56:20	 From tichure : does he want to admit it?

13:56:34	 From tichure : Or does it sound like he is still trying to justify it

13:57:04	 From Bailey : in the catholic sense i would say no because he committed 
a murder which is wrong no matter what but at the same time they say as long as you confess you can absolve your sins

13:57:12	 From tichure : but he doesn’t confess

13:57:16	 From tichure : confession requires

13:57:29	 From tichure : that you admit you were wrong

13:57:30	 From Bailey : right

13:57:36	 From tichure : moreover

13:57:47	 From tichure : especially in the Catholic and Jewish tradition, there something else that stays with you after the deed

13:57:49	 From Bailey : which he doesn't therefore he still wants the reader to 
believe that what he did was justified

13:57:52	 From tichure : when you’ve done something wrong

13:58:04	 From tichure : well we will get to psychoanalytical criticism on the character later in the semester,

13:58:13	 From tichure : but according to everything that we now talked about

13:58:24	 From tichure : was the revenge successful based on the narrator’s own description of the successful revenge

13:58:44	 From Bailey : no

13:58:49	 From tichure : very good

13:58:53	 From Bailey : because his emotions did get the best of him at some 
points

13:58:57	 From tichure : what is the author trying to tell us with this story

13:59:08	 From tichure : what was he explaining about human nature

13:59:41	 From Bailey : that retribution is not always met with full satisfaction because humans are humans and the emotions that arise cannot be helped nor ignored

13:59:49	 From tichure : very good

14:00:02	 From tichure : what is that saying about revenge?

14:00:09	 From tichure : there are two major ones that people use

14:00:42	 From tichure : what flavor is it supposed to be

14:00:46	 From Bailey : no matter how much you may despise the person, revenge cannot be exacted perfectly because the emotions are inevitable?

14:01:40	 From tichure : or perhaps something along the line that no matter what you plan, your emotions may take over and your plan will not go according to plan

14:01:58	 From Bailey : okay

14:01:59	 From tichure : what flavor is revenge supposed to be

14:02:03	 From Bailey : sweet

14:02:05	 From tichure : yes

14:02:13	 From tichure : what two basic flavors do wines come in

14:02:35	 From Bailey : sweet and dry?

14:02:40	 From tichure : is correct

14:02:45	 From tichure : and what flavor is amontillado

14:03:26	 From Bailey : i can't find that line

14:03:35	 From tichure : and actually, this is where you have to look up what amontillado is

14:03:43	 From tichure : this is more of a contextual information I asked you to look into

14:03:47	 From tichure : along with catacombs

14:03:49	 From tichure : Freemasons

14:03:54	 From tichure : Palazzos

14:03:58	 From tichure : all of the wines mentioned

14:04:02	 From tichure : including amontillado

14:04:05	 From tichure : Medoc

14:04:14	 From Bailey : a Spanish wine

14:04:18	 From tichure : and  de grave

14:04:21	 From tichure : keep going

14:04:23	 From tichure : what flavor

14:05:05	 From Bailey : oh its dry

14:05:06	 From tichure : amontillado is a dry Spanish Sherry

14:05:08	 From tichure : yes

14:05:11	 From tichure : it’s rare

14:05:18	 From tichure : at the height of the Carnival season, it would be incredibly expensive

14:05:21	 From tichure : or impossible to get

14:05:23	 From tichure : or both

14:05:31	 From tichure : which is why Montresor uses that particular product

14:05:32	 From Bailey : thus the appeal to fortunato

14:05:42	 From tichure : does Fortunato believe that Montresor has amontillado

14:05:51	 From tichure : that he paid full price for at the height of the season

14:05:57	 From Bailey : yes, he says he has a pipe of it which is probably a case in that day

14:06:05	 From tichure : I didn’t ask you what Montresor said

14:06:10	 From tichure : I’m asking what Fortunato believes

14:06:14	 From tichure : because when Montresor said

14:06:19	 From tichure : I got this pipe of amontillado

14:06:22	 From tichure : Fortunato says

14:06:27	 From Bailey : he doesn't believe him

14:06:33	 From tichure : impossible

14:06:36	 From tichure : at the height of the season

14:06:36	 From Bailey : because he keeps repeating the name and says impossible

14:06:38	 From tichure : impossible

14:06:41	 From tichure : that is correct

14:06:45	 From tichure : then why is he bothering to go down there

14:06:51	 From tichure : to check out this wine purchase

14:06:56	 From tichure : for a guy who is socially below him

14:07:00	 From tichure : why does he leave his parties

14:07:07	 From tichure : his snooty upper-class top-of-the-line parties

14:07:19	 From Bailey : well he says he is a wine connoisseur so he knew he could not pass up an opportunity to see it and taste it

14:07:21	 From tichure : to go with this guy who is lower than him

14:07:39	 From Bailey : and hes drunk so he is in a slightly inebriated state

14:07:39	 From tichure : again, what does Fortunato do that makes Montresor want to kill him

14:07:46	 From tichure : yes

14:07:49	 From Bailey : plus he might like the opportunity to make fun of him

14:07:51	 From tichure : again, carefully planned by Montresor

14:07:52	 From Bailey : for not having the real thing

14:07:54	 From tichure : that is it

14:07:57	 From tichure : that is exactly  it

14:08:13	 From tichure : based on their relationship, what you think would happen if Montresor had actually wanted Fortunato to do this as a favor for him


14:08:18	 From tichure : and and asked him directly

14:08:26	 From tichure : hey man do me a favor

14:08:30	 From tichure : check this out for me

14:09:07	 From Bailey : i think he would of just laughed in his face, scoffing that he wouldn't be able to have that type of wine 

14:09:25	 From tichure : leave your party and leave your friends and come down to my musty, damp catacombs

14:09:25	 From Bailey : based on his status and its rarity

14:09:29	 From tichure : yes

14:09:46	 From tichure : Montresor knows Fortunato

14:09:50	 From tichure : so he appeals to his vanity

14:09:53	 From tichure : and simply says

14:10:10	 From tichure : hey man, I’m on my way to see this other guy because you’re so damned important and busy that I know you can’t help me

14:10:25	 From tichure : and he keeps saying “oh you’re too important”

14:10:28	 From tichure : we should go back

14:10:36	 From tichure : people will be missing you

14:10:45	 From tichure : you are loved, respected and admired

14:10:49	 From tichure : as I once was

14:11:17	 From Bailey : right and that he will not be missed but fortunato will be and he doesn't want to be responsible for him

14:11:30	 From tichure : Poe wrote a lot of first person narratives in which we are looking at crime through the view of the criminal

14:11:34	 From tichure : something new at the time

14:11:46	 From tichure : notice there is not a devil character.

14:11:50	 From tichure : This is psychology

14:11:56	 From tichure : again, new at the time

14:11:59	 From Bailey : so could that be looked at with a Marxist criticism then? and right. no goblins or witches

14:12:05	 From tichure : people are doing bad things not because they were 
tempted by evil


14:12:07	 From Bailey : it is humans that are the real monsters

14:12:13	 From tichure : but because psychoanalytically,

14:12:15	 From tichure : that’s it

14:12:22	 From tichure : that’s where bad acts come from

14:12:27	 From tichure : which of course is the author’s point

14:12:36	 From tichure : at this time, there is a social argument rising between religion

14:12:47	 From tichure : which is made most of the laws and controls many of the 
customs of both Europe and the United States

14:12:50	 From tichure : and this new thing called science

14:12:55	 From tichure : which includes psychology

14:13:07	 From tichure : Freud was also doing his work in the mid-1800s

14:13:21	 From tichure : the idea being that scientists are looking beyond the religious explanation for things

14:13:42	 From Bailey : using real fact and reason rather than just stories passed 
down

14:13:56	 From tichure : most literature, especially  horror literature, especially the early works like “the monk” etc. was based on someone doing something wrong because of evil and the devil

14:14:05	 From tichure : and the author here is basically saying people do things because


14:14:10	 From tichure : it’s in their head

14:14:15	 From tichure : is not some external being

14:14:18	 From tichure : it’s them

14:14:28	 From Bailey : right, and that they are fully capable without supernatural forces

14:14:59	 From Bailey : so i would definitely say that is a Marxist criticism then because he uses this story to make a point about humanity

14:15:08	 From Bailey : and in turn, wants the reader to believe the same

14:15:44	 From tichure : Marxist criticism will focus on message, method and intended audience

14:15:52	 From tichure : Who is Poe writing for

14:15:55	 From tichure : the audience

14:15:57	 From tichure : and there are two of them

14:16:02	 From tichure : and again, one of them is brand-new

14:16:31	 From Bailey : the scientific/methodical audience 

14:16:47	 From tichure : it’s why he created the American short story and he created detective fiction. Sherlock Holmes is based on a character created by Poe

14:16:54	 From tichure : well step back a bit

14:16:56	 From Bailey : and the lower classmen? 

14:16:56	 From tichure : in general

14:17:01	 From tichure : where is this stuff being published

14:17:04	 From tichure : now you're on the right track

14:17:09	 From tichure : where are his stories being published

14:17:12	 From tichure : and his poetry

14:17:38	 From Bailey : America?

14:17:47	 From tichure : I’m asking what form do people read this in

14:17:57	 From tichure : wherewith the

14:18:02	 From tichure : where would they find the stories

14:18:05	 From tichure : and the poetry

14:18:18	 From Bailey : oh short fiction

14:18:22	 From tichure : where

14:18:36	 From tichure : what kind of publication

14:18:37	 From Bailey : im not sure sorry

14:18:44	 From tichure : here’s the deal

14:18:50	 From tichure : and again, this is the historical context that is important

14:19:03	 From tichure : if you read a biography of the author, you will find out that among other things, he was a newspaper and journal editor at various times

14:19:11	 From tichure : books at this time were incredibly expensive

14:19:14	 From tichure : rich people have books

14:19:24	 From tichure : long stories like Moby Dick and the house of the seven Gables and stuff

14:19:27	 From tichure : are in books

14:19:30	 From tichure : which are expensive

14:19:31	 From Bailey : right

14:19:36	 From tichure : this author is writing very short works

14:19:39	 From tichure : because they can be published in

14:19:42	 From tichure : newspapers

14:19:45	 From tichure : and weekly magazines

14:19:49	 From tichure : so that he can make money

14:20:13	 From tichure : because unlike many of his contemporaries, this author is 
actually living on what he publishes, rather than publishing for fun because he’s a rich guy who has nothing else to do after he is done with college

14:20:20	 From tichure : he did not finish college

14:20:24	 From tichure : because he could not afford it

14:20:30	 From tichure : a benefit of writing short stories

14:20:32	 From Bailey : right, and he struggled to hold a job

14:20:43	 From tichure : is that they can be published in easily dispersed sources

14:20:48	 From tichure : so your answer earlier

14:20:50	 From tichure : was correct

14:20:54	 From tichure : he is writing to the lower classes

14:20:56	 From tichure : who now can read because of public education

14:21:12	 From tichure : but in prior generations, was not the case

14:21:20	 From tichure : but he also wants respect in his own culture of writers

14:21:23	 From tichure : so we have a mix

14:21:39	 From tichure : he’s writing about lofty ideals and he is using fancy language and demonstrating the use of at least three different languages and cultures

14:21:40	 From tichure : French

14:21:42	 From tichure : Italian

14:21:46	 From tichure : and course the English language

14:21:52	 From tichure : but Freemasons of course would have been well known in the United States

14:22:05	 From tichure : and in fact were falling out of favor because of court scandals regarding their secrecy

14:22:09	 From tichure : that included murder

14:22:17	 From tichure : and the author himself

14:22:29	 From tichure : who was raised in an upper-class home but never allowed 
to be part of it

14:22:36	 From tichure : who went to school with upper-class kids but was not part of them

14:22:41	 From tichure : is making commentary about

14:22:49	 From tichure : the  arrogance of the upper classes

14:23:01	 From tichure : which of course his low class readers will completely buy

14:23:11	 From tichure : as well as demonstrating his skill a storyteller and wordsmith, which of course impresses the critics

14:23:23	 From tichure : and the critics of the time were  Herman Melville and Nathaniel Hawthorne

14:23:30	 From tichure : as was he.

14:23:48	 From Bailey : right. even though it says many of his works were criticized 
in his time and long after his death because he was made fun of for just being a wordy drunkard with a dark side?

14:24:09	 From tichure : he had problems keeping jobs because of his personality, and alcohol was a problem for him

14:24:30	 From tichure : your Marxist analysis is going to look at his conflicts with other critics

14:24:44	 From tichure : and his attempts to gain status and respect through works like this

14:25:05	 From tichure : as well is his desire to sell product, so he is writing  these shorter works that are going to be salacious enough for the average person

14:25:07	 From tichure : murder

14:25:08	 From tichure : desire

14:25:10	 From tichure :  sex

14:25:22	 From tichure : that he covers in his various stories and poetry

14:25:31	 From tichure : did you see the posting on where he got this story

14:25:33	 From tichure : the actual structure

14:25:51	 From tichure : by Snowe

14:26:14	 From Bailey : no, only saw one that like i said earlier suggests that this 
could of been mirrored from real people he knew and encountered at some point

14:26:23	 From tichure : that is in the calendar

14:26:41	 From tichure : well it’s a story would’ve heard when he was briefly in the 
military Academy

14:26:47	 From tichure : that has many of the same structural aspects

14:27:01	 From tichure : including revenge against an arrogant jerk

14:27:04	 From tichure : and burial

14:27:11	 From tichure : underneath the building

14:27:17	 From tichure : and he modified it

14:27:44	 From tichure : if you know anything about John Allen, you might look at Fortunato and realize many of the same aspects of this character are the ways that the author felt about Allan

14:27:54	 From Bailey : ooh okay, yes one source i read from said that he was speculated at just repeating stories through his work that might of existed already

14:28:02	 From Bailey : yes

14:28:17	 From Bailey : because allen really didn't want anything to do with edgar

14:28:28	 From Bailey : past his boyhood years at least 

14:29:39	 From Bailey : so in turn he is making several cases within the story. justification for murder, the arrogance and ignorance of the rich and the point that no retribution can be perfect because of human nature

14:31:50	 From tichure : yes

14:32:28	 From tichure : he is telling an cool story to lower class, and discussing human character  for critics

14:32:51	 From tichure : and explain how revenge can bite you back

14:32:59	 From tichure : like stepping on a snake

14:33:36	 From tichure : you need to have the author’s life

14:33:39	 From tichure : his work

14:33:53	 From tichure : his experiences to explain these aspects

14:34:04	 From tichure : for Marxist crit

14:34:31	 From Bailey : okay cool, and sorry to take so much of your time!

14:34:46	 From Bailey : i really appreciate it

14:34:57	 From tichure : historical crit will explain realities of the time, including why wine is kept with dead people and why Masons may act superior to others

14:35:06	 From tichure : its why i am here

14:35:43	 From tichure : You will find specific  essays that discuss his conflicts with critics, including a guy named Thomas English

14:36:01	 From tichure : and others who attack him personally and he is trying to prove that he is a quality writer

14:36:17	 From tichure : while at the same time is trying to appeal to the lower 
classes, something that the literary elite would not have done at the time

14:36:38	 From tichure : he’s using his story that he heard and modifying it to create 
a new story

14:36:40	 From Bailey : right, but because he comes from a humble background he is stuck between those two plains

14:36:45	 From tichure : which is what people do all the time

14:36:50	 From tichure : yes

14:37:00	 From tichure : he is the poor kid at the rich school

14:37:36	 From tichure : so he writes a story about a guy who has this lofty plan

14:37:40	 From tichure : to redeem his name

14:37:42	 From tichure : his family name

14:37:59	 From tichure : and he even tells Fortunato the family crest, which 
basically says “if you mess with me, I must take revenge”

14:38:07	 From tichure : but the guy screws it up

14:38:23	 From tichure : he doesn’t get to the very things that he himself said had to 
happen

14:38:30	 From tichure : and he spends 50 years thinking about it

14:38:40	 From tichure : and if he is Catholic, he is doomed

14:38:50	 From tichure : and he cannot admit that he screwed up

14:38:53	 From tichure : even to a priest

14:38:56	 From tichure : even to save his soul

14:39:09	 From tichure : his own arrogance is a problem as well

14:39:14	 From Bailey : ah okay

14:39:18	 From Bailey : was just about to ask that

14:39:31	 From tichure : do you think we are supposed to like Fortunato

14:39:39	 From Bailey : is it arrogance coupled with the fact that he thinks his death is still justified

14:39:46	 From Bailey : based on what fortunato did to him

14:39:52	 From Bailey : and no

14:40:20	 From Bailey : he clearly doesn't want us to like him as he uses words like quack

14:40:22	 From tichure : well, this is where the reader is going to say that in the back of the character’s mind, he knows that it was wrong because of his various Freudian slips, but that will be part of psychoanalytical criticism on the  character

14:40:28	 From tichure : very good

14:40:30	 From tichure : so

14:40:34	 From tichure : are we supposed to like Montresor

14:41:04	 From Bailey : yes

14:41:11	 From tichure : really

14:41:14	 From Bailey : and believe that what hes doing is justified

14:41:20	 From tichure : well he wants us to believe it

14:41:27	 From tichure : but he doesn’t do the steps that he said were required

14:41:30	 From tichure : moreover

14:41:34	 From tichure : is he also arrogant

14:41:41	 From tichure : does he say positive or negative things about servants who 
work for him

14:41:44	 From tichure : about the lower classes

14:42:02	 From tichure : are any of the servants home when this happens?

14:42:30	 From Bailey : nope

14:42:33	 From Bailey : he made sure of it

14:42:40	 From tichure : How

14:43:07	 From Bailey : by telling them to go enjoy the carnival

14:43:10	 From tichure : no

14:43:12	 From tichure : not at all

14:43:15	 From tichure : in fact

14:43:19	 From tichure : I want you to read the passage again

14:43:28	 From tichure : and at the same time I want to read clearly what he did with his family’s remains

14:43:31	 From tichure : in order to do this deed

14:43:40	 From tichure : I have to go to a department meeting

14:43:56	 From tichure : but we can talk about this again on Wednesday

14:44:01	 From tichure : when you read this part again

14:44:01	 From Bailey : okay sounds good

14:44:14	 From tichure : because it has to do with how this character feels about the working class (one of the author’s audiences)

14:44:31	 From tichure : and also what he does to his family’s ancestors in the 
name of trying to restore his families respectability

14:44:51	 From tichure : one of the great things about first-person narrative is that it automatically makes us want to understand and even like the character

14:45:02	 From tichure : whether or not we should is another kettle of fish

14:45:05	 From Bailey : right, its kind of contradicting since he messes with the remains in order to entomb fortunato

14:45:11	 From tichure : that is correct

14:45:14	 From tichure : is that okay or not okay

14:45:19	 From tichure : we call that something

14:45:28	 From tichure : when you disturb interred people

14:45:44	 From tichure : anyway, do some research on the background stuff and will talk on Wednesday

14:45:56	 From Bailey : okay thank you so much Professor!

14:45:57	 From tichure : it’s a good important conversation. Many people will benefit from our conversation when I post it

14:46:01	 From tichure : you got it.

14:46:04	 From tichure : Take care Bailey

14:46:08	 From Bailey : You too!

14:46:11	 From tichure : poof